I give 10 stars on the Doggy poo

Review by ahn sang hyun




genre:fairy tale
By: kwon jung sang


what's the basic story line?
One day dog come to the yard.And put the dung on the yard.And bird come and said "It is very dirty.And then the people said the most dirty thing in the world is dog's dung. And the dung are so sad because he think he is not useful to the world.So I must disappear in the world. At that time the dandelion's seed come to the dung.
So the dung care the seed.So the seed became the dandelion.
And said"thank you" so the dung is happy and he notice the each thing has their purpose and ability.Finally he is cry.


Are the characters believable?
Yes, I think so .The author is very realistic. And this story there are two characters.
One is the dandelion and other is dung.
And some other came, But it is not important.
They speak each other  it is very realistic.
So I think their personality is believable.

On a scale of 1 to 10, how would you rate this book?
I would rate this book an 10. the story is so excitement.
We can learn about 3 things in this book.
1.love 2.purpose 3.ability
So it is so nice. I think I hope I can learn all things to read this book.
So I give 10 an this book. I want to recommend this book to my friends!

learning english

Learning the new language is hard.Because people use the another language with out mother tongue.Usually kids started to learn English on 5 years old.But I learned English on 8 years old.

My mom is the English teacher in the high school.
So I learned English to the mom. I was very nervous about learning new language.First my mom taught the alphabets and words. My mom said "if you wrote English diary today, I would give chocolate to you" so I practiced very many times

And then I wrote the diary.Furthermore I could speak English withe mom. My mom was very happy.So I was happy too. I practiced English more. so I could write essay in 25 days after.

I got the 1 lesson in this event. If we decide goal and practice well to achive the goal. you must success. And then I practiced more. And I come to the glps camp now.
so I think if people do their best all his dream come true

An ode to amusement park

Scream and scare
Many people do not care
Everybody eats snacks
Until they have pain on their necks

People hear the lion's howl
And people spend their hour
If the lion is sleeping
People are clapping

In the game room, If you will find the key
you are very lucky.
I love amusement  park
I can ride on many things and it makes me spark

In the amusement park, you will see the keeper
you can see the steeper.
The animal enjoy that

The amusement park is the place which is specious
And It is also precious

my pet

Do you have any pets? I have a one dog in my house.
My pet is very cute and beautiful.
I introduce my dog

My dog's name is Gaeuli, It means fall.
My dog is a Yorkshire terrier.My dog has gray and brown color fur and her ears are very long
She was born in the fall. she eats many things.My dog eats fish ,ramen,chocolate and vegetables.
My dog does many strange things.One day mom opened the door to ride the elevator.
Suddenly my dog came out of the house and rode the elevator.
So my dog reached the first floor and she ran away.
My mom cried because of my dog.
I left food for her at night in front of my house's door.
My dog came to the door to eat the food.
I can found my dog.

I like my dog. It is my best friend.
When she happy , she shook her tail.
The yorkshire terrier is the dog which want to be received the love by human.
So she is always go up to the sofa and rub her body to the human.
It is also smile maker. So my house is always laugh because of the dog.
She always slept from at 9pm to 10am.
Sometimes she make her house with towel.
It is very surprise to see that scene.

I think my dog is very special and cute.
So I will be a good care person.
My dog is always my best friend.