Thursday, January 5, 2012

An ode to amusement park

Scream and scare
Many people do not care
Everybody eats snacks
Until they have pain on their necks

People hear the lion's howl
And people spend their hour
If the lion is sleeping
People are clapping

In the game room, If you will find the key
you are very lucky.
I love amusement  park
I can ride on many things and it makes me spark

In the amusement park, you will see the keeper
you can see the steeper.
The animal enjoy that

The amusement park is the place which is specious
And It is also precious
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3 comments:

  1. KIm JeunheeJanuary 5, 2012 at 5:31 PM

    I like to ride roller coasters

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  2. UnknownJanuary 6, 2012 at 3:06 AM

    grate!!! think you'll get the card. (I'm seungmin hong)

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  3. Ms. PalomoJanuary 8, 2012 at 6:09 PM

    I'm glad you chose an unusual topic.Your ode was good;it just needs more creativity with rhyming words.It's good to see that you tried.Good job!

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